Antony West (Author)

“Show, don’t tell” is a cornerstone of effective creative writing, yet it’s often misunderstood. It’s not just about adding more adjectives; it’s about immersing your reader in the experience rather than merely reporting facts. Instead of telling us a character is sad, show us their slumped shoulders, the glistening tear, the trembling lip. Instead of stating a setting is dangerous, describe the eerie silence, the flickering shadows, the oppressive heat. By appealing to the five senses and using vivid actions, you allow readers to deduce emotions, understand settings, and connect deeply with your narrative. This technique transforms passive reading into an active, sensory journey, making your story feel real and unforgettable. What’s your favourite example of “showing” in a book? Let us know in the comments.